I have been working with several teachers on the end of KS2 statement
manage shifts between levels of formality through selecting vocabulary precisely and by manipulating grammatical structures
The exemplification files for Leigh and Frankie show some good examples of what this can look like in writing.
- in narrative they have shown the difference in formality between the story and some of the speech used by characters
- in an explanation the text is more formal with a much more informal tone when relating the information to the writer’s own life
- in a newspaper report the formality of the journalists report is contrasted with the informality of the direct and reported speech
- in a diary different levels of formality are used to emphasise a point
- in a letter the personal reflection on what will happen is more informal to show the excitement and enthusiasm of the writer
We then went on to think about texts that would model this for the children. One that we had to hand was My Secret War Diary by Flossie Albright – author Marcia Williams. You can open this book on any page and find some examples of shifts in formality. We happened to open the book on p60 and found diary entries in very informal, spoken language which doesn’t always have subject verb agreement.
Weds 10th July BATTLING FOR BRITAIN
Flipping heck, I’m scared. I don’t want to sleep all alone downstairs no more. The Luftwaffe has begun to attack British Ships in the channel; our pilots spotted dozens of German aircraft dropping bombs on a convy near Dover. Cook says it’s their invasion tactic to draw British planes into battle and then destroy them … I hopes we got enough planes.
This is then contrasted with a war talk in assembly from Miss Duncan on p61. It is more formal, although it still uses the pronouns you and our but it also contains the passive to distance and separate ‘us’ from the downed pilots who are prisoners. Another good page to use would be p22 and 23 where the informality of the diary entries is contrasted with a more formal newspaper report and within the report there are shifts of formality as well.
Which texts have you used to teach this? Has anyone used a film that would support the teaching of this element?